🔗Understanding low-band responses helps you avoid common mistakes.
Below is a Band 5.0 sample for IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, followed by a full breakdown based on the official IELTS criteria.🔗
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⬆️ Task 1: Line Graph
⚪️The graph below shows the number of people using public transportation in a European city from 2010 to 2020.
⚪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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🔗 Band 5.0 Sample Answer:
1️⃣ This graph shows how many people take bus, train and tram in the city from 2010 to 2020. Bus is most popular in 2010 but then go down. Tram is going up all time. Train is also going up but not fast like tram. In 2020 tram is more than train and bus.
2️⃣ The graph show that people use less bus and more tram in 2020. So transport change in this time. Bus is not good maybe or people like tram more now. The line go down for bus and up for others.
3️⃣ That is what the graph shows.
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