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Some people believe that technology has made our lives more complicated, while others think it has made life easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion🤩
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integral part of modern life, influencing almost every aspect of how people work, communicate and spend their free time. While some argue that technological progress has made everyday life unnecessarily complicated, I believe that,
on balance, its benefits considerably outweigh the difficulties it creates.
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On the one hand, there are several reasons why people may feel overwhelmed by modern technology. The
rapid pace of technological change means that individuals are constantly expected to adapt to new devices, applications and digital services. This can be particularly challenging for older generations, who may
struggle to keep up with technological developments. Moreover, our
growing dependence on technology has created new problems, including online fraud, privacy concerns and excessive screen time. For example, many people now find it difficult to
disconnect from work, as smartphones allow employers and colleagues to contact them virtually anywhere and at any time.
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On the other hand, technology has undoubtedly made numerous aspects of life
far more convenient and efficient. Tasks that once required considerable time and effort can now be completed within minutes. Online banking, digital government services and e-commerce allow people to manage their daily responsibilities without travelling or waiting in queues. Technology has also
transformed the way people communicate, enabling families and friends separated by thousands of kilometres to remain in regular contact. Perhaps most importantly, technological advances have
broadened access to education and information, allowing millions of people to acquire knowledge and develop new skills regardless of their geographical location.
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From my perspective, the complexity associated with technology is largely a consequence of how it is used rather than an unavoidable result of technological progress itself. Although people need to develop new skills and exercise greater caution online, these challenges are relatively minor
when weighed against the substantial benefits that technology provides.
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In conclusion, technology can undoubtedly create additional pressures and introduce new risks. Nevertheless, I firmly believe that its ability to
save time, improve accessibility and facilitate communication means that it has ultimately made modern life easier rather than more complicated.
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High-band vocabulary from the essay🤩
an integral part of modern life — неотъемлемая часть современной жизни
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on balance — учитывая все обстоятельства / в целом
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the rapid pace of technological change — быстрые темпы технологических изменений
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struggle to keep up with — с трудом успевать за чем-либо
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growing dependence on technology — растущая зависимость от технологий
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disconnect from work — отключаться от работы
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far more convenient and efficient — гораздо удобнее и эффективнее
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transform the way people communicate — изменить способ общения людей
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broaden access to education and information — расширить доступ к образованию и информации
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when weighed against the substantial benefits — если сопоставить с существенными преимуществами
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save time, improve accessibility and facilitate communication — экономить время, повышать доступность и облегчать коммуникацию
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