#writing

Use definite, specific, concrete language.

Prefer the specific to the general, the definite to the vague, the concrete to the abstract.

A period of unfavorable weather set in. VS It rained every day for a week.

He showed satisfaction as he took possession of his well-earned reward. VS He grinned as he pocketed the coin.

by the way, there are only 2 spots left in the Essay Program.
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