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📝 Setting off your paragraphs 📝

Another thing I keep pointing out more often than I would like...

❌ Don't

"What exactly has the most pronounced impact on children is still a matter of debate. While a whole host of factors undeniably play their role, I believe familial influence is the most profound one.
The factors other than the family include but are not limited to such external forces as school, peers, television, and social media. These might indeed instigate children to make certain choices or to pursue certain activities that they otherwise would not. For example, ..."

✅ Do

"What exactly has the most pronounced impact on children is still a matter of debate. While a whole host of factors undeniably play their role, I believe familial influence is the most profound one.

The factors other than the family include but are not limited to such external forces as school, peers, television, and social media. These might indeed instigate children to make certain choices or to pursue certain activities that they otherwise would not. For example, ..."

Please, insert an empty line between your paragraphs! Pretty please. 💜

In word processors, you can also press "Tab" or even hit "Space" three or more times - this will shift the first line of the paragraph to the right, thereby setting it off. But this doesn't work on social media.

If you don't do either, you create a wall of text - and no one wants to read a wall of text.
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