An awesome #IELTS essay written in my "Writing with New Scientist" course. 💜

The essay was so great when I first checked it that I had to read it several times in order to find something to correct or at least suggest. It's absolutely awesome now - it has academic lexis, hedging, a range of cohesive devices, a sharp focus - all the things you need for a high score. 📝

https://iraluts.blogspot.com/2022/11/ielts-writing-task-2-should-we-avoid-or.html