The most important factors for achieving happiness? Read Anna Skopina's awesome IELTS essay to find out. 📝
Curiously, the essay was not written in my IELTS course - it was written in my "Writing with New Scientist" course. Anyways, it's awesome and it contains a beautiful range of cohesive devices (some of which I highlighted to make sure you notice).
https://iraluts.blogspot.com/2022/10/ielts-writing-task-2-most-important.html
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