Хотела бы чуть позже записать видео-разбор данного кусочка, а пока, прикрепляю его ниже, кому интересно - пишите в комментариях, что тут не так, и что вы бы исправили?
I had a great last weekend. I went to the park with my friends on Saturday. We walked a lot of time and took photo beautiful places. Then, I told my friends, them I want to drink coffee and we went to cafe. There were a lot of people there. I ordered the coffee and one with my friends ordered a new dessert. After that is cafe, we walked again. I looked at people and listened the City. Then, we went home. When did I go , I did the English homework, and helped about home. My sister arrived in the evening to me and we saw the film and sang songs together. I ran to the park in the morning on Saturday, after that I went shopping. I really enjoyed the weekend! 💞